Im a long way from my spread sheets and calculation files to independantly check but Im sure if you followed Kevin Camerons calculations your conclusions will be correct.
I have read and personnally confirmed that fuel flow can be insufficient for continuous running at peak rpm in many, probably most, standard fuel delivery setups. My friends and I have worked through this on our race bikes. On a 500 ccc single cylinder using methanol the flow rate needs to be 2.3 times the volume of petrol. This can be very diificult to acheive.
With Amal concentric carbs it requires the use of large industrial sized taps, and lines - I dont have them in front of me but I would estimate a good 5 mm ID. Any junction pieces need to be the same and then the carb bowl and float needle needs to be for alchohol with larger internal diameters.
I also had to go through this exercise to work out whether my gas tank was large enough to run 15 laps racing. You can use a hell of a lot of methanol in 20 minutes racing.
Even for petrol for racing we dremel a slot in the side of the tunnel that holds the float needle and check the delivery rate - with the tank caps closed.
But for the street I could hardly imagine this will be an issue unless you are on derestricted German autobans !!
On power measuremnt on intertia dynos. Yes not as good as a brake dyno but still very helpfull if you dont have a choice.
You can turn the mph data into rpm on a spreadsheet if you work out the gearing. Or on some dynos if you do a run on say 50 % throttle and read an rpm and mph data pair the operator can then reset the x axis to rpm on the computer.
I agree that anything near 50 bhp is very good for a street Commando. There is a shop in Upper Hutt that has many dyno runs pinned on the wall. The only Commandos over 50 bhp are race tuned.
The old original published data will be crankshaft. Plus they will be bikes in very good condition and properly tuned.
Proper tuning makes a huge difference. I have gained 7 bhp on an inertial dyno by working with cam timing, ignition timing and carb set up.
The guy that got that 12. something time in California was Norman White. Peter Williams mechanic, a Norton race shop tester and still in business today.
http://www.normanwhite.co.uk/profile.htm